No longer a foreigner in an unknown turf
I say with poise
You my love ain’t just a choice
Life isn’t easy, life ain’t the same
Every day a struggle
It’s everybody’s game
I say with poise
You my love ain’t just a choice
Life isn’t easy, life ain’t the same
Every day a struggle
It’s everybody’s game
In times of trouble, in times of pain
We stick together
Knowing there is so much to gain
One thing you ought to know
Is my love for you has grown
Like never before
I got nothing to offer but these words
I hope you realize
You are the song that my heart never denies
Whatever happens I am with you
Through thick and thin
I want you too
This time around I won’t shut you down
When I move about aimlessly
At times of want.
13 comments:
Welcome back... Your peoms always make me feel so hopeful and fuzzy inside... Thanks!
beautiful :)
Thank U Rashi & Praj...:)
This is a special ode dedicated to a very special person in my life.
I truly appriciate ur views on the poem
Love
Tee
WOW!!
Tina has finally come of age. you've learnt the art of free prose. u dont feel compelled any longer to compromise on meaningfulness just to keep up with the rhyme...lovely gal..perhaps one of ur most mature works till date :)
Keep blogging gal
Cheers
CRD
Thankk uuu Mr.Tacky....lolll
Thanks chrissyy....:D
That was sweet.... :)
"You are the song that my heart never denies" i liked that line the most...
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Words are not mere words, they carry more sense,
In these times of actions, when words mean even less,
These are the words, that will clear up the mess.
Nice!!!
awsome poem teens... i love it!!
@ Anonymous 1 :
I am glad that you were able to make sense out of this. Now I am curious to know who u r.
None the less thanks a ton for visiting my blog and sharin ur valuabe thoughts.
xXooOOxX
@ anomymous 2: Thanks janan for ue comments :)
Lovely lines tina! Full of emotion.
Nice poem.
Wow! loved it
hey...lovely poem....
keep writing!
cheers
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