She was small, hardly ten years old
Heard the stories seen them all
She was too young to understand any of this
but she quickly matured before the other kids did
Every time and when in pain
You can see her crying in the rain
There she goes
Out in the pouring rain
The only time where she opens up
her little heart carrying all the pain
This little girl goes
Goes on crying in the rain
She didn't know her family well
Had no proper upbringing
She thought she was living in hell
Lived behind closed doors
With no fairytale stories
Just a barren life filled with remorse
There she goes
Out in the pouring rain
The only time where she opens up
her little heart carrying all the pain
This little girl goes
Goes on crying in the rain
No-one knew what she was going through
She was a mystery except for a few
Every time she wanted to cry
She would look out the window
With arms open wide
Silently wishing for the heavens to cry
There she goes
Out in the pouring rain
The only time where she opens up
her little heart carrying all the pain
This little girl goes
Goes on crying in the rain
Clear drops from the sky
Mixes with the tears from her eyes
She lets the rain whisper sweet nothings
Before she bids them all good-bye
14 comments:
drops from the sky
Mixes with the tears from her eyes
The moment I started reading the poem and went thru the first stanza, I was waiting for those 2 lines to appear. The best part of this poem.
Very touching !!
I realise the anguish within - when tears mix with rain, to make sure no one knows if it is the drops or tears. Kudos for bringing out the subtlety.
Extremely moving
Very touching...!!
The emotion is carried really very well... Tat was good, Tee...:)
However i din't really get the last line.... What exactly does bidding them good-bye mean?? Is she ending her life or something??
Anyway, after a long gap, another good post..
Keep posting often..Work will always be there...
Cheers..!!
Arjun
thank u buddies for ur comments. They mean a lot to me...
To ans ur que ari... what i meant was she bids goodbye to the rain and heads back home.
Cheers
Tee
hmmmmmmmmm bechaari ladki :) :)
kyunnnn...kya hua?
kyunnnn...kya hua?
Lovely words again from Tina. The pains, the depth of the emotions are well portrayed. The mix with the tears, was so moving - made me think of a lot of those moments in life, thanks
Love
Archana
very good.
your poem touches to heart
loved this poem ... the repetition of the best lines was good ... and the thought behind the poem is worth applause :)
aww this is so sad, you have put a lot of feeling in this poem.
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wow! touching.
loved the lines
very touching......brings out tears in mah eyes..
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