Searching for love
Through the day
Fighting pain
Through the night
Things change, people change
But the plight forever will be the same
Digging deep into the past
Trying to resolve unsolved emotions
Puts one in a delicate position
With no perfect present
Time didn’t wait, wounds never healed
But one moves on along with the memories
No one knows what the future holds
Tomorrow is far away
To survive this twinge
Is a battle on its own
Will someone be there?
Will someone be there for me today?
Through the day
Fighting pain
Through the night
Things change, people change
But the plight forever will be the same
Digging deep into the past
Trying to resolve unsolved emotions
Puts one in a delicate position
With no perfect present
Time didn’t wait, wounds never healed
But one moves on along with the memories
No one knows what the future holds
Tomorrow is far away
To survive this twinge
Is a battle on its own
Will someone be there?
Will someone be there for me today?
25 comments:
Digging deep into the past
Trying to resolve unsolved emotions
Puts one in a delicate position
With no perfect present
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liked these lines a lot!
keep writing..
very nice poetry !! really !!! 10 out of 10
really, it's just amazing reading it all. keep up d good work!! :)
nice one !
well written .. the past is the past and thats where you should keep it !
u r too gud yar..i had read all of ur stuffs and every time its better than the prior.
what else can i say..keep posting..
"Things change, people change
But the plight forever will be the same"
so very true!
nice post,
keep the good work going !
I liked the drawing of the girl and the dove very much !
loved the first 4 lines..
we search love during the day and fight the pain of it at night!!
very nice writtn.. :)
Nicely written and specially
"Things change, people change
But the plight forever will be the same"
Cheers!
dont agree wit a lot of it, but good poem, and yummy blog !(i love chocolates :))
liked this line abt love in the day and pain in the night.
keep writing!
hey i dont know bt i dint like this one tht much as compared to people in white one and earlier ones..of course i am no poet not even close to it..probably i dont have a sense f appreciaition fr poem ..screw me..
keep writing
@ Arun
ur entitled to ur opinion dude...so is cooool...
Cheers
Tee
awesome.... I love the ending !!
Will someone be there for me today?
Its soooooo like you know.... leaves you waiting kinda.... I mean... well I don't know what I mean but you get me don't you ?!
Melancholic!
hmm.. this poem is different frm ur other poems.. and this one is so true.. lemme quote frm ur poem..
Things change, people change
But the plight forever will be the same
i love these lines.. after all tomoro is jus another package of surprises.. and ur last line
Will someone be there?
Will someone be there for me today?
trust urself and b thr 4 urself.. love whatever dat takes its time to come..
@ gabriel..i Do get wat u mean...totally...
Thank u guys!!
Tee
Hey! Back here after a long time. Good to see you in your element still. Neat post.
hey...good poem...and not just good but a true also..
Nice emotions.
nice..are you a pro in poetry??? i liked template..
good poem...
but do you think love is too complex..??nowadays...
i dunno...hope i didn't offend ...its jus that i feel its jus simple n its probably because i'm not hurt by it..
were you??
hmmm gudsome !!!
touched ma heart !!! :)
hey your poem gives the message that robin s sharma gives in "who'll die, when you cry"...gr8
nice one..all the others were also nice..keep writting[:)]
"Tomorrow is far away ....."
and the last but one paragraph are ones i liked the most.....
One of ur best poems for sure.....
Cheers..!!
Arjun
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