Hush now don’t say a word
Just close your eyes and see the world
The peace, the beauty that surrounds your mind
Is not what you’ll get to see on the outside
Serenity is a quality one must develop
The beauty of it lies underneath your cup
The cup of life is in your hands
Use it wise, use it while you can
Live your life to the fullest
Yes, I have heard that a million times before
But have you thought about the rest
Rest assured you will have places to go
I would love to see the world
The world I see when I shut my eyes
Hopes and dreams fade the minute I open my eyes
I am willing to press on till my last breath
I will not give up even if am on my death bed
Serenity, we will get there for sure
With our eyes open
We will make a secure future.
Just close your eyes and see the world
The peace, the beauty that surrounds your mind
Is not what you’ll get to see on the outside
Serenity is a quality one must develop
The beauty of it lies underneath your cup
The cup of life is in your hands
Use it wise, use it while you can
Live your life to the fullest
Yes, I have heard that a million times before
But have you thought about the rest
Rest assured you will have places to go
I would love to see the world
The world I see when I shut my eyes
Hopes and dreams fade the minute I open my eyes
I am willing to press on till my last breath
I will not give up even if am on my death bed
Serenity, we will get there for sure
With our eyes open
We will make a secure future.
25 comments:
Definitely we will secure our future keeping eyes wide open..
Nice POEM
A beautiful poem.
serenity.. i found serenity in your poem.. i find the tone of ur objectives in your poems as well... before signing off, let me quote frm ur poem..
I would love to see the world
The world I see when I shut my eyes
Hopes and dreams fade the minute I open my eyes
I am willing to press on till my last breath
i feel this soundin frm my inner self..
I felt serene when I read this poem.....
Every poem of urs makes me imagine , it inspires and leaves an impression....
This poem surely belongs to that category...
Waitin for more Tina....
Cheers..!!
Arjun
nice poem..if only life was really like that...
the only time that i find serenity, is the time i use to write posts on my blog, else i never find any time [:p]
keep writing
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Chris dSOUZA
I wish I had that serenity in me
Cheers
serenity is the ultimate utopia that we all aspire for..
and you surely have given a direction to those wandering souls in search of it...
very nice indeed..
Nice pics!
ur poems r getting better and better
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Great one buddy :)
i liked the lines:
"Hopes and dreams fade the minute I open my eyes
I am willing to press on till my last breath"
dreams are just life :)
God Bless
~~~Golden Vulture~~~
Great Blog, i wish I had started my blog
www.fullscrew.blogspot.com
a little early :)
We all are thirsty for tranquillity ..lovely poetic snippet you have written to point towards a path that can lead us there.Rightly we have the power to mould our life ,though we are not wise all the time .As I am concerned ..serenity is a quest ,and Life is a journey ..
Also your writing style is full of prose ,the words Hush are clichéd mingle well and are all typified by the reason you give at the end .
Cheers
Thanks a lot u guys...:) and @ sid..its never too late
nice poem
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your poems are getting even more better as the time passes by..loved reading it..gr8 work
waiting to hear more such stuff from u..
your poems are really nice..not ordinary blogs..i liked the 'life goes on' one..keep it up..
"With our eyes open
We will make a secure future."
-- nice ending !
yet another master piece produced..
thoughtful n lovely lines and the pic went well with it...
but i think, no matter how much u try, one cant achieve absolute serenity... the beauty of life lies in bein troubled and passin over the troubles :)
Serenity is a quality one must develop--- i like this !
in the last sentence it wud have been better in my opinion had it been future secure rather than secure future...well u r the poet..ur the best to decide! :)
beautiful poem!
nice poem reaaly a quality keep it up...
w.o.w :o
Nice Poem, but somehow it reminds me of some songs :-)) May its my imagination!!
Good work
nice flow of thoughtsss
:)
"I would love to see the world
The world I see when I shut my eyes
Hopes and dreams fade the minute I open my eyes"
the poem is awesome...most of your poems describe the beauty of searching something...keep goin..
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