Can I come to you?
When I feel low
Will you lift me up?
And never let go
Can I tell you?
All of my secrets
Will you help me?
Safeguard it from the rest
Can I hear you say?
I love you
Will you treat me well?
Till the end and not sue
Can I see you cry?
Just to me
Will you let me be there?
To set you free
Can I know you more?
The whole of you
Will you be my friend?
From now on till the end
Posted by
Tina Angelin
18 comments:
good 1!
HIII....Tina Angelin Nimalan..
nICE BLOG WORK..AAAH LOOK IS TOOO GOOD.
AND THE POEM...LOVE IT..
WELL SO U DO WRIGHT POEMS.
GOOD HOBBY.
Since u commented on the promote blog section...am giving a short review about your blog on my site. and in favour u can link my blog to yours.
thanx.
hmmm.... is it directed at a person or the inner self ??????? whichever way, its good ..:)
hmmn nice post... I felt as if I m saying it myself.
Ur greatest plus point lies in ur simplicity.....
Hope 2 see more action in this blog
I liked that very much. On one level it seemed to be human... the kind of thing I'd say to my lovely wife. The kind of thing I'd tell a good friend. Yet, on the other level it is divine... the kind of thing Christ... :0)
a simple yet powerful one.. u are a poetess.. and a good one in that
I am inspired....... Keep it up bravo!
Cheers...
Ilyas Kazi
nice poetry!
i liked the 2nd stanza , the most!
Nice poem .....
Simple and striking....
U write a poem a day or wat??
Cheers..!!
Arjun
nice one...
very simple..yet told a lot..
good one!
Simple and sweet!
It is just awesome!! Amazing work.
I know it might sound weird but i would love to use it in the book i am writing of course with paying all the credits.
If you are interested, mail me at top.lena@gmail.com
thanks :)
m reading it for the second time..
and i seemed to read it more patiently this time
lols
and this feeling is voiced by many..
in search of a true friend who we can dole out our feelings to..
i understand..
nice one
and true to the heart too
:-)
So simple and so powerful!! Beautiful!!! Very striking!! :)
M really bored... telln u t s good, really good, nice one n al.... so i decided to steal ur poem 4 a change... so thanks so much tina.....
ya
:)
Sweet One and very true..
I guess everyone feels this way towards someone really speacial..
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