It is so clear
The breath of life is here
I don't want to miss out on it
Like I did the last time
What makes me say this
Is what I feel inside
That everyone of us is special
And there is nothing to hide
At times we can just feel so low and blue
Feel worthless without a clue
Look deep within you
And your sure to find something new
I am just a small town girl
With dreams and hopes
Got no clue of what to expect
Got no idea about who I am yet
I just hope that I can make a difference
In some one's life
Be there around them to make things right
Random thoughts running in my mind
But my words are true
So let them shine
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Tina Angelin
24 comments:
poem is good.....wordings r of gr8 flow and each line depecis certain meanings as well
"I just hope that I can make a difference
In some one's life
Be there around them to make things right
Random thoughts running in my mind"
i liked this stanza very much
happy writing
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Hey wat can i say......
Just the flow is so good....
and u come up with thought provoking stuff...Infact inspiring stuff..Gr8
Cheers..!!
Arjun
too good
u seem to do it effortlessly!!
great job
cheers
anish
i could relate myself here.. this poem is quite different frm ur other poems where u gave much importance to rhyme.,. i lik this poem more than them
nicw one... but why always poem?
hmmm.. a romantic girl may b
good work.... keep it going.... :)
URBANISMO ILEGAL
COIMBRA
PORTUGAL
True word always shine...
nice one..
a pretty simplepoem, but seems from the heart. why dont u try writing short stories or anecdotes also? jus give it a try
keep writing
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Chris
you already make a difference, just by writing such a simple yet meaningful poem. And you are right, everyone is special.. and once we realise it it will be easier for us to make a difference first for ourselves, then for our loved ones and maybe for the world :)
gr8 girl ,......
keep writting u do rock!!
words so simple can be so beautiful1!! great!! made me think!!!
yeah girl they r directed to one person!!
and thnxxx heya but it was my past ,...
just read on REVENGE ,..hope u find it intresting as this one is also directed to tht person!!
heya ur thoughts r great ,........
keep posting ,....
m proud of u !!
good work.. flow of the poetry is good!
nice one
keep postin!
good one as usual buddy !! have a nice day ahead @@!!
they sure would shine :)
All poems here have some or d othr thing!!
keeep it up!
keep posting!
nice thought provokiing stuff..
im more of a prose person so for me...ne1 who can ryme is supremely talented :)
gr8 stuff lady.
n i also lkd ur template
nice poem. esp liked the lines"
I am just a small town girl
With dreams and hopes
Got no clue of what to expect
Got no idea about who I am yet
I just hope that I can make a difference
In some one's life"
good...
i really liked it... it was very truthful and innocent...
esp loved the lines:
"At times we can just feel so low and blue
Feel worthless without a clue
Look deep within you
And your sure to find something new"
I didnt jus read ur words but I saw that those were the same thoughts that rack my head at times.
Amazing I never realised it until I see it so beautifully drafted by U..
Awesome Poems!!!
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